Goonjh – An Anthem of Freedom dedicated to the People of Pakistan

its really a nice poetry i like it but i see most of urdu speakers blog poetry in Roman Urdu it should be in Urdu such as http://www.poetak.blogspot.com

or just http://www.yehlog.blogspot.com i like these two blogs due to writer is working hard with Urdu

very nice. I salute your father for standing up to Zia (munafiqul momineen)
yes your poetry is very appropriate. I was growing up in Zia era and I am also an eyewitness to that dark era of Zia and jamiat etc. There has to be life after this other wise the sacrifices made by honest people
Urdu Poetry has given me lot of hope during current dark days. Even today politicians are cess pool and stinking even more
ya allah is mulk pey raham kar (ameen)

naz;

rough diamond needs polishing:)

had a tough time reading it in roman (even though i write in roman too)

Adab Adab I wrote this exactly as it came to me in about ten minutes without any revisions. Now as I look at it I want to add a shair that basically reflects the urgency of the moment

Cheen lay is lamhay ko waqt kay gariban se
Chooti to yeh ghari wapis nahin palati hai

and amend the previous shair as follows

Ae hamwatan teri awaaz meri awaaz se milay
To yeh goonjh har takht ko ulati hai

Naz

Teri galiyon mein aaj azadi ki hawa chalti hai

This line made me cry...

Wah wah wah, Irshad Irshad -- well done Sophia ;)